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Entirely but instead look for excellent examples of descriptive writing that can be emulated. If you like the way a person has described their interest in travel or their eyes for example, modify it to fit your profile.
Don't be negative. Don't complain about bad past relationships unless the point of your story is how you have changed into a more desirable person. Most people are looking for a relationship that will help them escape life's disappointments. Don't drive them away.
Don't come across too needy. Who is